Oxymorons. Gotta love em.
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Wow! A girl is going to take over a guys body! Woah!
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getting more interesting..

(I probably shouldn’t be giggling at this point.) This is good.

Small correction: where you write “What was going one,” I think you meant to write “on.”
And I totally would’ve picked a musician, too. :D
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Thanks, Ana Cristina. I was so focused on the story, I missed a lot of my little spelling errors. You’ve been invaluable in this.