oo suspencefull! i like :) great imaginitivity & i can’t wait to read what happens next.
LoA
(p.s. Welcome to Ficlets!! :])

I like the sudden, scary ending.

Yes! I want a sequel too!
And Welcome!
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Thanks so much! It’s really weird, I thought that I would just go ignored here by everyone (except for my friends), because I just needed a place to write random things. =P
^_

Look out! It’s a vicious Penguicorn!

Welcome! Great first entry! Wonder what made the penguicorn so mad? I mean she was just standing there, and supposedly it just ate, a few times. Hmmm. I’m curious.
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Very nice indeed. I like the creature bit, but also in the first two paragraphs the word choice is superb. For some reason, I found the word “unlucky” before “deaths” to be especially forceful. The “k” sound was cool, maybe.
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I was thinking like a feathered narwhale maybe? Whatever the darn thing looks like, great little bit of a story.
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That’s great! And, you know, funny though CMT , KOM’s comment is, I like the name ‘Penguicorn’. :D
Excellent job!
LoA

Penguicorn.
Lulz.
I gots a new nickname for my flying penguicorn!! But would it really be a penguin if it CAN fly?
>.> <.< >.>

Oh and by the ways, I really have no idea what edge she is standing on.
Use your imagination.
Imaginaaaaation.