This story-line is great. I like the dreaming aspect of it, where do they go… and the reaction when kids are faced with sudden serious injuries, even death.. eerie, but accurate. Where are you going to go with this?

Agreed, very intense for such a short piece.

S.J.

Thank you both. This sort of just developed as I wrote it. Although, I’m not really sure if I’m going to do anything else with it. It seems as though I’m better at stand-alone pieces.

P&F