Ooh, great flip at the end there. At first I thought you were going post-apocolyptic, then maybe a super-powered kid story, then oh, we’re all really Martians. Very nicely done from a cute, small interaction/scene. LoA
I love it! I had thought about her eyes and how they were anomalous…but I wasn’t exactly expecting that. Then, “red planet” and “rover” connected, and I got it. Hooray! LoA
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