Loved it, great dialogue from our nervous protagonist
it is really good!! zzomgg!! whatt happens noww?!
Wow, what happened to him? And great dialoge btw. =)LoA
Woah! Very nice, what is next? Sequel please!
OK, I’m gnawing my fingernails wanting to know what happens next. And I just had a manicure! :p So you’ve just got to sequel this…LoA
Just cause Ana asked for it, there’s a sequel up now. Just can’t say no to the likes of her.
Hmmm.. time to read the nxt one!
he sure is a nervous motor mouth. lolLoA
“two hulking specimens of why tattoos are scary” ROFLMAO !I’m really enjoying this series.LoA
The tattoo line was genius. I liked that description a lot. Great series so far. You do wonderful internal dialogues.LoA
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