Ooh, the villain! Great job on a despicable, entitled, sneering, bloody villain. Poor guy on the cement didn’t stand a chance.LoA
One nasty villian.. cold blooded. I liked the imagery of the first sentence, and >The gray cement was dyed a new color. descripitve w/o being graphic and tellin gus that he bled.LoA
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