Very cute and a nice ode to nature. It’s quite lyrical and delightfully descriptive. Small point, just to be constructive, the repetition of ‘at all’ at the beginning of the third paragraph is a bit clunky.LoA
Thanks, I never would’ve caught that.
wow, this was really pretty. I can deffinatly see the trees and lake in my mind’s eye thanks to your description! =)LoA
wow this is really amazing and great description! wow I’d love to be there right now.
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