that is very sweet and well told story of love and caring. poetic.

Terrific sentiments here, I like it a lot. Just watch the spelling and it’ll be flawless as well.

super nice. i’ve felt that way before. love the “foam on hot chocolate” description, that’s perfect.

A very nice and even familiar sentiment, that desire to swoop in and be a hero ultimately frustrated by the desired object’s own resilience.
Loa

Beautiful. I love the I can’t wait to be her hero line.
:D
LoA

whoa.
strong.
deep.
love it.
=]

oh wow. that’s amazing. very very nice!