Comments on Murders, Inc. by Russell Ruffino

Russell Ruffino

My original idea for the bad adverts challenge, mutated into a phone call dialogue type affair.
- Posted 2009-01-12 03:47:33.
Lone Writer

LOL
I’m laughing so hard right now I might die right here!
:D
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- Posted 2009-01-12 03:47:34.
One Time, One Chance

Lol!
this was sooo funny!
=]
- Posted 2009-01-12 03:47:34.
THX 0477

That’s horrible, really horrible. Though I love the check on Spamalot instead of Mamma Mia! I know I’d ask to make the substitution, and I even kind of like ABBA . Great story and good job keeping the dialog clear enough that I could tell who was talking, even through the change over on the phones.
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- Posted 2009-01-12 03:47:34.
Kermitgorf

Free. o my… funny dialogue. Like the crikey part..“>Basic, is a trainee with a machine gun, a bad temper and an even worse aim< funny line.
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- Posted 2009-01-12 03:47:34.