Oooh, that was rough. Nicely told and very effective. You nailed it. Now I’m depressed.
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A superior story! Well done. After one of my students died in an accident last year, I was convinced for weeks that he wasn’t gone or that even from beyond the grave he’d send me a myspace message like he had always done before when his missed class. This brought all that back. Heck of a story!

Oof. That was gut-wrenching – so much so that I think I’ll write a prequel.

What a story. This is what story telling is all about.
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