I know this bites. However, Jocinda wasn’t the one privy to every thing that happened. It was the mice who have the story of how the cookie was defeated, why the moon is/isn’t made of cheese, what was that Eden incident and how DO the mice figure in it, and WHY is Flandip so darn buggered about finishing this mission a few years ago… OH – and ‘milk and cheese planet from an ‘advanced culture’ – my idea of a wonderful joke.. :)
I hope you enjoyed the story – I really liked writing it. :)
I really enjoyed reading this story and writing my couple of small parts. I need to go back and read the whole thing. I can’t wait for them to add that type of feature to the site (you know, make it easy to read an entire story).
Susan Holder is terrific
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