Not really too mature, but hey, that’s me.

oh. wow. I didn’t wanna rate this, I really really didn’t, because I couldn’t come up with a rating, but too late. I’d clicked. four stars, I guess. good story. Very expressive.

AND …

interesting.

Bitterness of a breakup.. real emotional.. wtg on the mature rating with the use of one wrod, most wouldnt be so prudent. I applaud your sensitivity.

Oh wow, how horrible. Very good.
LoA

Ah, the agony and the ecstasy…an almost universal human response is well expressed, in modern terms, within your ficlet. Never capitulate – on the outside!

Ah, the agony and the ecstasy…an almost universal human response is well expressed, in modern terms, within your ficlet. Never capitulate – on the outside!

don’t listen to them.
you know who you are.
they’re going to try to tell you otherwise.
brush ya shouldas off (as we gangsters would say).
=]

llolloloolollolololol

llolloloolollolololol

Bitter,bitter,bitter.

this si really good. I like the last line in a sad way… =)
AND 2 STARS ?!?!?! AHHHH !!!! Disgraceful! (not you gemminx) lol j/k