ok, i know this is supposed to be sad, but i broke out laughing so hard when she said “if you tell me to hold on i’m going to slap you”

SOO FUNNY !

This was really good.
I haven’t read this series, but it sounds like a monumental moment!

Great writing!

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awe, that was sweet! I hate crying after soo log of not cryring but you’ve really needed to, ya know?

Okay, probably not becuase that was a confusing statement.. BBut anyways, really cute and kinda fun but always sad.
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Good mix of verbs and adverbs to give us a feel for the actual setting and motions of the characters, interspersed with believable dialogue.

You did a really nice job with this. I hope you don’t mind if I sequel.
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No, I don’t mind at all! Go right ahead! I love sequels.

Love this…I haven’t read the rest of the series, but this makes me want to read all of it. Nice work.
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beautiful
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totaly worth five stars

Awww, poor Wes! She’s so tough!