Funny back and forth, and even without descriptors I felt it was clear enough to be two distinct characters having a conversation. Cute story idea too. Loa
Scents are very evocative in fiction and in life and add an important element to any reader. Your ficlet was about a scent but should also be a reminder that good writing engages all the senses.
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