Whoa- this is really good, I love the last sentance, so creeeeepy (sort of- that’s not really the right word)
Ooh, impressive point of view piece from the vantage of someone with Anorexia nervosa. Definitely a scary and dangerous disorder.LoA
A very chilling take on eating disorders. Well written and very effective.
Awsome in a very creepy way. I think most people can relate to the story in some way ~ we all want to have control over some aspect of our lives.
It is so sad, that so many women go through this every day. Your point was clearly written. and beautifuly so. You have a way of really connecting with your adudience and grabbing their attention.
tragic tale of an eating disorder and the consequences. well told. love the 1st person point of view.
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