Not my best, but it fits to the challenge.

I thought it fit really well and even had a great set-up for that last line. I liked it, a little moment of clarity in the confusion that is adolescence…and written from the female point of view no less!
LoA

Well the female perspective isn’t all that hard for me ;)

Yeah, THX , Chuck’s a girl; didn’t you know that? : )
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Excellent work. I agree with everything that THX said above. Great dialog; these days, if someone writes witty teenage dialog well, they get compared to Joss Whedon. For the sake of originality, I won’t do that.
I will say that I loved almost every line, except for the You know what, just stop before this goes any further… paragraph. Something about it falls flat compared to the rest; I don’t know why.
But as a whole, it is very, very good.

Hmm I’ll see what I can do about that line, thanks.

Good ficlet, I think everyone has been there at one time or another. My favorite part is the title, however, because who can really define what is right and what is wrong??

good ficlet, I liked it overall!!

I like the double entendre of the title. What’s the “wrong” here? Is it sex in the school bathroom, or the guy’s not taking no? It works for both. Good job.