Comments on Mirror, Mirror, On the Wall, What is My Greatest Fault of All? by Stovohobo

Sailor Emo

This is beautiful, Stovo. !!!
- Posted 2009-01-12 03:57:59.
Kermitgorf

Nice take on the 7 deadly sins… Dorian Grey Like.
LoA
- Posted 2009-01-12 03:57:59.
Mask By The Moon

=twitch. sniffle.=

you’re mean, ya know that? I started crying.
- Posted 2009-01-12 03:57:59.
THX 0477

Ah, the seven deadly sins…my favorites. Wrote a triptych of short stories all around the seven deadly sins and the seven cardinal virtues. It’s nice how they cover all the major sins. Nice conflict in this poem between acknowledging faults but trying to move past them.
LoA
- Posted 2009-01-12 03:57:59.
♠Ana Cristina♥

Beautiful rhythm to this poem. Great work.
LoA
- Posted 2009-01-12 03:58:00.
Mistress Elsha Hawk

Love it! Not like anyone else’s, and great idea using the Seven Deadly Sins.
LoA
- Posted 2009-01-12 03:58:00.
One Time, One Chance

the seven deadly sins!
i just watched them on America’s Next Top Model today.
=]
~
nice job, anyway.
stovo’s a poet!!
XD
- Posted 2009-01-12 03:58:00.
Flute Loop<33

This is amazing! I love it, and just like everyone else, I love how you used the 7 deadly sins =]
- Posted 2009-01-12 03:58:00.
Valley Fey/Pinprick

I love this. For some reason, I pictured each one roiling to the surface in facial expression, then the next one taking over, like a battle of faces. Great idea.
- Posted 2009-01-12 03:58:00.
Valley Fey/Pinprick

I love this. For some reason, I pictured each one roiling to the surface in facial expression, then the next one taking over, like a battle of faces. Great idea.
- Posted 2009-01-12 03:58:00.