I still love the pro/con here of being an obsessed guy. Dastardly plan.

Brilliant setup. The funny thing is Tom is based on my actual college roommate and some of the descriptions you give here actually describe him quite accurately. I’ll probably sequel soon.

Ok, I am starting to understand the story more, so maybe I’ll sequel this one.

I have written a sequel to Aditi Broota’s to keep the story moving along.

Tom started to pop off the page in this segment (I think).

The start to a devious “While E. Coyote” plan. I’m loving it. : )