When I think of diaries, I think of my high school self, and how I used to keep these duo-tang folders and stuff them full of paper and just write and write and write. I’m trying to channel my seventeen-year-old self here, but I’m kind of rusty since it has been about 12 years… :p
But I guess I could always go to my own students for inspiration.

Very nice diary! I like the beginning because when I used to write a diary I would do that. Never did come up with a beginning,.
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same here, i could never start it with Dear Diary, too cliche i guess.
nice job, thanks for entereing=]

Very impressive job portraying the adolescent female. This reminds me that I really should pull out my journal and make an update or two. A lot has happened in the past 10 years.
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haa. love the end line.
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You captured it well. Reminds me of all the high school drama. And I love the use of the crossed out words, the start and re-start.

Hehe the last line is great. I think you captured the essence of the average teenage girl pretty well.

Pretty funny, with some cliché comments. But good cliché. ‘Cause we recognize it and laugh at it. =)

I like it a lot. Yes, don’t the guys never seem to notice us, or know we’re alive? * sigh * I think you did a great job with the teenage girl…and, being one, myself, you portrayed the feelings pretty well.