Wow, this is so powerful. That last image is just… wow.

I agree, the last image is very haunting. I also like the line, “You cut your own face from the portrait.” Awesome writing.
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I completely agree. The line You cut your own face from the portrait is representative of how great this story is.

This is simply amazing. I loved it.
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Great imagery! They almost tell the story for you.
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Wow, this is really great! Very strong, and I loved the last line too.