I love this. It works so well that I think I’m going to go back to Some Kind of Hero and try to modify it a little bit, so it fits better (but I won’t be able to do that or sequel for a few hours). Love the bit about the part time auctioneer and the title’s great!

Okay, to modify the earlier comment, I went back and rewrote Some Kind of Hero tell me if you think it fits better now. I’ll sequel when I get off work tonight.

Kind of a cutting line, that ‘Jodi didn’t even notice you’. Funny stuff, the whole back and forth about who was going to look like a tool and all.

Jordan not being noticed or feeling attractive is a nice theme throughout the series.

slow your roll funny stuff there :)