Wait a second, did that ending just change? I like how you left Jordan in suspense. It must feel horrible to always be deemed insignificant compared to your peers, like poor Jordan is. Tomsie-Womsie? I love it! Will have to use that phrase to torture Tom somehow. The plan appears to be working.

Yes, I changed the ending after realizing that I hadn’t addressed the issue of Jodi telling Jordan whatever she had to tell him. I’m glad you like it, I was unsure about it at first.

Okay, sequel is completed.

Tomsie-Womsie giggle