Well this ficlet came out a whole lot different than I had intended when I started it. For the record, I wanted to try my hand at describing something in as much detail as possible and then see if you guys could guess what I was describing.

I had pudding with my lunch today so I went with that. But the ficlet went in a weird direction and I couldn’t resist the payoff at the end :) Anyway. Just a bit of silliness.

Wow, that was AWESOME . I was like “hookah? ice cream? air?”

You’re amazing with the details, Melia!
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Hehe. Hookah. :)
I debated the mature tag too, so if anyone’s offended, I’ll put it on there. I wasn’t sure.

No, I thought the sensual lover line was funny and not over the line or anything. Great description, though I was thinking Ben and Jerry’s ice cream as the culprit.
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A logical assumption THX . I, however, am not much of an ice cream fan, but you couldn’t know that so yeah, good guess :)

Ha, that payoff in the last sentence is great. I wish I hadn’t read the comments though so I could have really been surprised.
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Ha ha ha ha. I hope you didn’t lick the foil top in public or get caught by your co-workers for real, but I like that ending. Fantastic description. I can see how this could be taken offensively if you continued with the sensual theme, but you did a fine job of holding back on the reigns, its perfect.

No I was at home by myself. Eatin’ pudding. And lickin’ the lid. And it was gooooood.

No I was at home by myself. Eatin’ pudding. And lickin’ the lid. And it was gooooood. :)
Actually, it was a flavour I’ve never had before which is why I was reluctant to try it. I fear the unknown.

I love it – awesome. Congrats!

Haha! I had thought ice cream all the way, and then when you mentioned that you were considering mature tagging, I read it again. Brilliant (and totally hot)! Makes me think of this sneezing video (which also might not be suitable for minors)
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http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=E61_oa3kb2o
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Describing an object or event in detail without saying what it is, and then letting your readers guess it, might be a good idea for a challenge.

ooooooo, I absolutely agree w/ that challenge idea BARomero (Hint Hint).

Go for it with sequels, I say :)

i love it! I think it was some kind of beverage at first, like coffee. and i like the challenge idea too

chocolate pudding

hahahahha.
brilliant descriptions and such
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You had me duped. Having read your other stories, my mind wasn’t thinking of ordinary foods. Great payoff!

Ok well I admit I cheated and read the last line first…but great story, I love the descriptions. If I hadn’t cheated I really would have been rather confused.
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i love pudding and licking the top cover, you captured a soothing moment of eating pleasure.
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Now you’re making me race to the kitchen for some fondue and strawberries. This ficlet just made me…hungry! Lovely job.