This story is very heartwarming for siblings!

Hmm, very nostalgic. I really enjoyed this.
P.S. watch for spelling.

This was a good story!

Kind of melancholic, but a very good job giving a sort of ebb and flow of warm and sad feelings over the course of such a short ficlet.

Nice descriptions and emotion in this. Short, but sweet. Like Laine, I’m a little nit-picky over grammar, spelling, and general aesthetically-pleasing formatting on ficlets, but this had enough in it to make me not really care.

I agree with Stovohobo’s comment. I care a lot about proof-reading, so I recommend reviewing your work after you post it. For some reason, I don’t always catch my mistakes when I’m in edit mode, but the second I hit publish and review it, the mistakes are right there, super obvious.
However, this piece is beautiful enough in its story to transcend its few mistakes.
LoA