This keeps getting worse, or better, depending on it it’s from the perspective of Mr. Worth or me.

ok, that explains how he can still be speaking to him without being in the car. Bravo. The suspense is building. He cursed vividly.—I laughed at that line.
I’m likeing this very much. It’s ridiculous of course, but imagination is an important asset for a writer and you’ve got plenty.

Exciting and tense little thriller, obviously well thought out. Just cause I feel like nit-picking, a pistol shot from one car to another is a pretty low likelihood hit.