Btw, “Amitola” is Native American for “rainbow”, although I can’t remember which language it actually comes from.

Really beautiful. Lovely imagery.

Amazing imagery! I love the culture aspect, and the metaphoric…ness…of the rain. Much the way I view the “heaven-tears” as you so beautifully put it. Love the pen name, by the way. I adored “Curious Incident of the Dog in the Nighttime”
LoA