omg.
sadd.
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ahhh…..
alot of your stories leave me speechless…
this one escpically…
and it kind of reminds me of the POC3
when they are singing and most of them are hung… or hanged….

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Awesome work here.

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Ooh, great stuff, really setting up a dire situation and making us feel for her. Lots of questions, lots of possibilities, and the back and forth worked really well.
LoA

oh wow…I didn’t realize, until the end…and liked with the Our Father thing going….wow. wow.
LoA

I pictured the ‘witch’ trials of our ancestors. I’m not really sure that’s what you had in mind, but it fit! great descriptions!
LoA

HA! I just read your tags, guess i was right. Silly me for not noticing!

Great story. I’m certainly glad I didn’t grow up in Salem at that time. I don’t know what’d be worse to be the witch burned at the stake or the vile people who did it.

I love that the prayer being said is taking place at same time as the action around and you go back and forth with the lines of the prayer while showing us whats taking place.
perhaps one of your stand alone best stories.
really get a sense of the horror of the witch trials and feel for this character.
Bravo Stovo.
LoA