I hesitate to comment because I’m floored by the imagery and captivated by the tone. What a beautiful poem. (sidebar: how do you get the accents on the deja in deja vous?)

Pardon the misspelling of the phrase. ;)

Wikipedia is a glorious thing – I went there to get the accents for déjà vu. It’s got an interesting article on it, too.

Impressive job answering a basic challenge with a poem. I would not have thought of that. Then again, at this moment I’m not sure I could think of much. Anyway, lovely…not that I’m surprised or anything. This is you we’re talking about.

OK, now I’m just blushing. Thanks for the compliment. :-)

Bittersweet. Love is ageless!

Wow. Wow. This was so incredible.

That was a lovely poem; the descriptions are so alive…Thank you for entering!

That was amazing! Captivating, entirely. I was hypnotized by the sultry, silken sound of it. I related as well. The way you describe things…oh, I’m still in awe.
LoA