Wow. So deep…

very deep…it made me curious about what could be so horrible to make her flee from all that is safe…sequel?

Ouch. Well told and effectively emotional.

Beautiful in your emotions, as always Candi ;)

Bambii you’re amazing

At first, I didn’t like this was written in one big paragraph as I tend to think that stunts the pacing of a story, but as I got into the narrative, I realized that it works here.
Just as the sentences run together, so too her thoughts as she makes this pivotal and ultimately cathartic decision.
One small edit: where you write about her looking back at her house, you forgot the word “at.”