Missed one third person line in the second to last paragraph, but still an effective and emotion-laden ficlet. Really horrific feel to the first part there, very tragic.
By the way, I love how you are openly foreshadowing what is to come. Thanks for going by what we talked about, it’s a great plan. Oh! I also just sequelled this!
Did u know that dreaming means you are stressed about something?… At first i put 4 stars… but then i realized, this is a really good ficlet, one worthy of 5 stars, just like all of the others in this series
Never Explain
Stovohobo
THX 0477
Never Explain
Blusparrow
N555champ /\and/\ X-Ninja