A very ominous and foreboding entry into the challenge.

I like the imagery and the sparse narration – it really adds to the heightening sense of fear in the passage. Great use of repetition in the last section to add the feeling of déjà vu.
LoA

Ditto, really, I can’t say it any better than they did!

Wow—I got the chills reading that. I like the effect of the bells. Thank you so much for entering!

Really, really effective description and mood. I was wondering when the déjà vu would come in, and it came in with a chill. Very cool.