there’s some deja vu if I’ve ever seen it! Hilarious!

Great! This was funny in a creepy-crawly sort of way, in that I was imagining this happening to me and how I would feel (eesh!). I like the description of the “second” James, lying back in the armchair with his legs crossed, his eyes half-closed and a smile on his face. As if he’s physically expecting this to happen.
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That was a really cool story. I want to know more, which is always a good sign. And, yes, doppelganger is a very funny word!

Very very good. (In fact, my head is still spinning!) I just love the way doppleganger rolls off the tongue.
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Dreamer Challenge
Day Two #3

I can’t believe I spelt the word doppelganger wrong. After all, it’s not as if I put it in the title of my story or anything. Now fixed, so thank you, thebetweenspace, for subtly pointing it out!

Lovely entry! Doppelgangers are tricky things, and I like the way you’ve used it in your Ficlet. Thank you very much for entering!

Funny but kind of creepy at the same time. So many questions asked, so few answers one can give in ficlet form – which, I think, is one of the beauties of ficlets. I also like the use of repetition of the first paragraph. It’s like triple déja vu (dejá? No ´?).

Clever, amusing, and engaging to read – great work, Mycroft! You’ve manage to capture quite a lot here.

Congrats on being featured! This story definitely deserved it. ;)

Time travel is always a trip. Funny little take on it this time. Cute stunt repeating the opening line, certainly works well for the challenge.

Love the concept! Very inspirational.

Congratulations on your featured ficlet! I loved the way you started and ended with the same paragraph. Great story.
Oh, and Doppelganger is my new favorite word. :)
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Nice. I like how the ending is in the middle.