Ooh, great job setting both the scene and the character’s mindset. Makes you worry about his optimism and cheer him on.

Sequelled, this is getting good. Hope you read my note. Take up as much space as you need to.

It’s also your turn to sequel The scarecrow series. Please note me on that.

Nice, I like it. He seems to be good.
LoA

First of all great title.
Second of all, this was a great line, by my standards
“How exhilarating it would be to end their lives.” Now thats poetry.
Third of all it sounds like I kiss ur buttocks every story, but it amazes me how far you have come since the stories you and i used to write together (and never finished)