Very nice, I thought you’d need more than one ficlet, but thanks for leaving a little meat on the bone so I could put in my own details.

Interesting line from Max. Great job on the descriptions of the fantastic (sci-fi) elements.

Is max the one that is evil. dang. oo their is a sequel. YEY !
LoA

Interesting? this really took me for a twist on the roller coaster ride that this story is. A story from Tyler’s point of view really made me angry at first but then I took an unbiased view of the situation.