Haha, too funny. I can imagine these two chatting, slipping on their ugly-but-trendy purses as they head out for a day of shopping and sipping outrageously expensive caramel macchiatos (with skim milk and sugar-free syrup, of course).

The only critique I have is to watch your grammar. Try to avoid using ‘net slang (OMFG!) during a story, and also using so many exclamation points during narration. Maybe they’re just personal tastes of mine, but I wouldn’t recommend it for storytelling.

lol yeah…=] ((took the OMFG out if anyone was wondering where she got that from, she was right, it looked wierd))

deffinetly sugar free! why have it any other way?!((guess that makes me a wierdo cuz i LOVE sugar…and no, i DON ”T have a problem….maybe…..=]))

erin
LoA

God knows you love sugar. Good ficlet. But like kells said, watch your grammer. But, hey, it’s better than D.J.’s. ;)

DJ will never learn to spell right EVER ,
i’ll bet you a dime (aka: my lifes saving)

Hehe untill it got to the part
“He’s not perfect. He snores.â€?
I thought that it was Bella talking…
This is good! I can see this really happening.
Thanx for entering the challange!!!

welcome, i had tons of fun. the twilight series is one of my favs and i can’t WAIT for the movie to come out on 12/12/08!!!! it’s gunna be AWESOME lol

glad you lik it!
erin