Great job dropping us into the middle of a sci-fi situation in a very personal and human way. And yeah, great set-up for a killer last line, not only surprising but so very teenager of the kid to say.
“And why do they even need those huge antennae” Well, you know what they say about the size of an alien’s antennae… . Great job on this one! And grats on being featured. LoA
“Just show me one Herminerm who can even pick up on something that’s right in front of him!â? Antennae don’t have to detect anything, they could just be an evolutionary hangover, or they could act as another set of hands.
Ridcully Calvert
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Storykeeper of Fae
THX 0477
Capital "W" Writer (LoA's Geekus Awesomeus)
Momiji-chan
.:band baby:.
Amaster
Mousey
Matthew Walton