Very eerie, dismal. Maybe a little too much repetition on the cold and gray stuff, but I could go either way on that point. Still evokes very powerfully the drab, sad existence of this place and the life of this character.

did u purposefully repeat the cold/gray thing? At first I thought u did it on purpose but then i saw the pessimistic comment above and i begant to doubt your purposefulness….

wow i didnt kno i had read this story before! (too bad I didnt know the story)…
Its cool that the dreams were Tyler’s all along… at first i thought they were Max’s.

wow i didnt kno i had read this story before! (too bad I didnt know the story)…
Its cool that the dreams were Tyler’s all along… at first i thought they were Max’s.

wow i didnt kno i had read this story before! (too bad I didnt know the story)…
Its cool that the dreams were Tyler’s all along… at first i thought they were Max’s.