You change tense in that third paragraph there. I think you meant “moved” instead of “move.” Other than that, I did enjoy this, especially the first line.
Thanks for the comments, and the edit there. It was “moved,” but me and the “d”-key were having a fight…something about me drinking too much and not working hard enough, I told it that it didn’t do the dishes enough…so it went to its mothers for the day. Silly d-key.
Great story that really got me interested in the character. “Zeiss-Ikon eyes” I remember reading a story in Omni magazine years ago where the characters all wanted Zeiss-Ikon eyes. I don’t remember the name of the story but that reference has always stuck in my memory.
i always threaten the d if it doesnt act right i’ll switch it with the squiggly line key that gets its attention, the squiggley line key is like the minor leagues for keys the d she be happy he is in the show.
Plenty of little hints dropped in here – and great imagery. You know, not that I know what getting high is like, but I would assume that it was well-described in this.
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