neat format that you had a line of space between the lines, it really gave it an authentic feel. the only spot that didn’t really fit was, “This is a little more wierd than I expected. Okay, a couple weeks ago I woke up and everyone was gone. It was kinda strange.” i think the character would be a lot more freaked out then “kinda strange” and “a little weird”, but other than that i really like this. =]
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