ooo, what happened?!
LoA

i like that the character is more freaked out now, it makes the story line more authentic.
=]

oh wait!
i get it!
okay.
hahaa.
ignore the last comment.
=]

ooh. this is good and I was a little confused until I read OTOC ’s comment. now it all makes sense

haha i love the last line! nice job!