Very poetic, though maybe pushed a little too far in the first couple lines. Still overall a lovely effect.

Very nice and, like THX had said, extremely poetic. I’ll go tell Stovo it’s his turn

Ok THX , I killed my “darling’s” in the first few sentences—hard to do but you were right, I had to see past my subjective view to do it. Thanks.

I don’t think it is too much, but then again I am a sucker for description. I like that picture that you gave off. Nice!
LoA

You got TRIPLE sequel!!! :]

Very nice :)

Very nice :)

Incredible change – of course, all your installments to this series have been original and thought-provoking. (If you couldn’t tell, the previous ficlet is pretty much where I stopped reading the series for whatever reason).