I like the beginning of that story… is she physic or something, good job!

I like it. Leaves alot of open questions.

thnx guys..feel free 2 write a sequal just make sure 2 let me kno if u do so that i can check it out k?

I’m sure you already seen it, but I wrote a sequel :P

I liked the detail about the dream and wonder who “they” are and what these two are on the run from. Great start to a series.