“My friend went to outer space and all I got was this lousy T-shirt” Kind of sad, missing them, I like that you stayed with the same emotions in this ficlet. The protagonist is finally feeling exactly how the friend felt in the last one.
“My friend went to outer space and all I got was this lousy T-shirt”
Kind of sad, missing them,
I like that you stayed with the same emotions in this ficlet. The protagonist is finally feeling exactly how the friend felt in the last one.
I sequeled, hope you like it!
Solid emotional content.
Yes, I also love the emotional connection of the story and I really like the ending with the promise of a return.
I think countdown is one word when used as a noun. Other than that, I really like this. Same emotional weight as the first, if not more.
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