Thought I’d take a shot at this. Hope you don’t mind! If you do, or if it doesn’t flow with what you guys already have, do feel free to brush it aside and continue what you were doing.
Nice. I can’t see why they would complain. As Ana said, it fits in very well with the overall story. Great continuation, and I think you captured the essence of the characters that they created. Bravo.
Awesome transition. It works just as well as the others. I don’t really get mad if anyone comes in and sequels things in my series – I like it. Not everyone feels that way, but that’s what ficlets is all about.
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