Very nicley written!!!! I really liked it.

I loved the scene you created here, it seems magical. Nicely done, keep up the good work.

I loved the scene you created here, it seems magical. Nicely done, keep up the good work.

Quite magical and mystical a scene here, with just a few little missteps along the way. Still, overall a lovely little ficlet.

Very surreal, great imagery. I like how it feels as though there’s two stories going on here.
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Very well written. It painted a magical image between both man and women, kind of a forbidden love.