Emotional and heartrending. Great evoking of feeling in it, and the dialogue from the mom seems slow and sad. There are just a few spelling errors and such, but that really doesn’t take away from it too much.

Nice, emotional piece with a killer ending, although did you mean it was dated the day he went into a coma there at the end?

You have prequel.

@thx…In the original story, I had an additional paragraph about her missing her father coming out of the coma briefly before his passing. Unfortunately, I butchered edited it slightly to fit inside a ficlet container.