Exciting finale to start with. Hats off to you for attempting the challenge.
Very cool story. I like it. Fast-paced, edgy, human. I like the tinge of regret in both characters. Why do I have to be Mr. Pink?
I like the idea of jumping right in to the action here. It fits in very well with the challenge. Bravo.
I’m loving this. I agree with John Perkins, throwing the reader right into the thick of it really makes you want to keep reading it Can’t wait to see what happens “next.” LoA
Congrats! You won an award in this challenge!http://ficlets.com/stories/34540
This challenge spawned some good ones. I, along with the others, like the opening sequence.
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JLaughter
John Perkins
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