Great title and great pieces Ben.

Fun set-up for the other one, giving more meaning and depth to the stuff I just read.

Another cool bit here. I really feel the characters in this, you did a very good job at making these people rather than just characters.

Aww, poor Niles. That’s not fair making me care about the guy after you killed him. Bastard!

This just keeps getting better. Very good character development.
LoA

Great choice of the order. It went from exciting climax to anticipating beginning, when you’re nearly shouting, “No! Don’t go!” at the computer.