Wow, lots going on and all out of order, confusing and tantalizing.

Ha ha, 40$. Silly Canadians. =P
This is incredibly disjointed and confusing. Which is perfect given the challenge. I’m interested to see how you bring all this together.

Is that a Canadian thing? I was wondering about it…that’s what cost me the gist of the story here. I kept thinking ”$40, not 40$!” Crazy Kanuks :)

So…the cards are shuffled here.

Nice descriptions.

Nice installment, and that first line is awesome.
LoA

Switched the $ sign around.

Congrats! You won an award in this challenge!
http://ficlets.com/stories/34540

I forgot to tell you that when you go to the above link, go to the sequel, “part 2,” in case you don’t see your name on that page (I had to break up the eight awards into two ficlets).

Amazing opening line, and very intriguing bits of the creature. The rest of it displays a tired and desperate mood.