Wow. Dark, haunting, and told with a sort of lyrical prose. It’s creepier how the narrator justifies everything he does.
Stovohobo came close to the word I was going for…DEMENTED. Nice work, THX …but um…get yourself checked out, ok? ;)
Stovohobo came close to the word I was going for…DEMENTED.
Nice work, THX …but um…get yourself checked out, ok? ;)
This is very unlike your usual writing. In fact, I’m not used to seeing your work labeled MATURE . However, this does a fantastic job of revealing the dark and twisted mind of your narrator. I love that it’s in first person.LoA
I loved the line Philistine spoilsports.
Woof, that is a heavy one. I liked it :-D
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